POWERPOINT PRESENTATION CHANGES!

From looking at my mark scheme for last years project, my presentation scored highly. Therefore, I asked my teacher where he felt it needed boosting which turned out to be the 'social group' section. With this insight I then, re read all of my target audience questionairs to see what the audience wanted, especially the sentence and opinon sections they left, as it enabled me to get a clear sense of their personalitys and style.

Below is my changes, later in the presentation I have a slide of all the things which would appeal to the social group. So this is literally more to the point of their wants and persoanlity style.